Question
Read the following sentence with misplaced modifiers: My favorite toys were Legos and a chemistry set growing up; the most fun of all was using the chemicals to melt the plastic bricks to me. Which revision places the modifiers correctly? My favorite toys were Legos and a chemistry set, growing up; the most fun of all to me was using the chemicals to melt the plastic bricks. Growing up my favorite toys were Legos and a chemistry set; the most fun of all was using the chemicals to melt the plastic bricks, to me. Growing up, my favorite toys were Legos and a chemistry set; to me, the most fun of all was using the chemicals to melt the plastic bricks My favorite toys, growing up, were Legos and a chemistry set; the most fun of all was using the chemicals to melt the plastic bricks to me.
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Barclay
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The correct revision is:"Growing up, my favorite toys were Legos and a chemistry set; the most fun of all was using the chemicals to melt the plastic bricks, to me."