Paragraph A & Paragraph B }(l) The crowd listened patiently to the cacophony of voices. It was General McDougal's voice they most wanted to hear. He had served multiple administrations over his 30 -year career. He had never had much of a public persona. The public surely wanted his expertise now. & The crowd listened patiently to the cacophony of voices, but it was General McDougal's voice they most wanted to hear. Though he had served multiple administrations over his 30 -year career, he had never had much of a public persona, but they surely wanted his expertise now. REFLECTION: 1. Which paragraph reads more smoothly? Circle or highlight your answer. Paragraph A Paragraph B 2. What about the sentences makes that paragraph read more smoothly?

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Paragraph A & Paragraph B }(l) The crowd listened patiently to the cacophony of voices. It was General McDougal's voice they most wanted to hear. He had served multiple administrations over his 30 -year career. He had never had much of a public persona. The public surely wanted his expertise now. & The crowd listened patiently to the cacophony of voices, but it was General McDougal's voice they most wanted to hear. Though he had served multiple administrations over his 30 -year career, he had never had much of a public persona, but they surely wanted his expertise now. REFLECTION: 1. Which paragraph reads more smoothly? Circle or highlight your answer. Paragraph A Paragraph B 2. What about the sentences makes that paragraph read more smoothly?

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1. **Which paragraph reads more smoothly?** Paragraph B.2. **What about the sentences makes that paragraph read more smoothly?** Paragraph B reads more smoothly due to better cohesion in sentence structure, avoiding unnecessary repetition and creating a more streamlined flow of information.

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