PART 6: Revising a Paragraph Directions: Read the paragraph below: Revise the paragraph to c contain at least 1 compound, I complex, and 1 compound-complex sentence. PARAGRAPH Original Paragraph: Jon had always wanted to be a climber. Reading wasn't easy for him. The letters always seemed to swim on the page. Math never really clicked for him either. School was hard. He excelled at climbing. Jon felt at home on the side of a steep cliff. He liked the way his body felt. He liked the way it was always challenging. His parents weren't fond of his rather dangerous hobby. They couldn't keep him away from the mountains. Eventually they gave up trying. square

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PART 6: Revising a Paragraph Directions: Read the paragraph below: Revise the paragraph to c contain at least 1 compound, I complex, and 1 compound-complex sentence. PARAGRAPH Original Paragraph: Jon had always wanted to be a climber. Reading wasn't easy for him. The letters always seemed to swim on the page. Math never really clicked for him either. School was hard. He excelled at climbing. Jon felt at home on the side of a steep cliff. He liked the way his body felt. He liked the way it was always challenging. His parents weren't fond of his rather dangerous hobby. They couldn't keep him away from the mountains. Eventually they gave up trying. square

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Jon had always dreamed of becoming a climber, despite his struggles with reading, where the letters appeared to swim on the page, and math, which never quite clicked for him. School posed a challenge, yet on the cliffs, he found solace and purpose, relishing the constant physical and mental challenges. Despite his parents' apprehensions about his perilous hobby, they eventually relented, unable to dissuade him from the mountains he loved.

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